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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
Yes , at least twice.
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
Been too long now
This sad song
Those words drifted on somehow
Calling me back in
I feel so far
From you now
So wrong
But something else is coming through
That feeling
Comes backTo haunt me
But it’s gone
I never wanted
To let you go
But it’s been
So long
Between the noise
I can’t quite conceive
I hear you…Breathe
I think…I’m about to
Lose you now
I hear…
I just can’t let you
Let you go
I can’t
Let you go
I never wanted
To let you go
I am blue
One last thing
Just a few words
You have…
You have gone
Something else is coming through
That sad song
Is long gone
This sad song
Those words drifted on somehow
Calling me back in
I feel so far
From you now
So wrong
But something else is coming through
That feeling
Comes backTo haunt me
But it’s gone
I never wanted
To let you go
But it’s been
So long
Between the noise
I can’t quite conceive
I hear you…Breathe
I think…I’m about to
Lose you now
I hear…
I just can’t let you
Let you go
I can’t
Let you go
I never wanted
To let you go
I am blue
One last thing
Just a few words
You have…
You have gone
Something else is coming through
That sad song
Is long gone
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
Music for me is evolving, so many choices.
I have several versions of this orchestral
Song. I wrote the lyrics , an after thought was the orchestra. I really wanted a song more like Jacob’s ladder but it is very different.
I have several versions of this orchestral
Song. I wrote the lyrics , an after thought was the orchestra. I really wanted a song more like Jacob’s ladder but it is very different.
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
The version before is pretty good but I despise the synth/ sequence other that it’s good, what one is best?
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
@Thatbastarddon , which one sounds more natural ?
I hate to judge these things. I like both, for different reasons. However, both share some sort of cinematic vibe…very “Hollywood soundtrack” IMO. This is in no way a bad thing in my book. The second one is shorter, and gets to the point more quickly. The first builds itself a space, and fills that space pretty well…more dynamic.
Sargeant Preston
Ambassador of The Ninth Chord
Don pretty much summed up my thoughts and posted my thoughts for me. That bastard Don always knows what I'm thinking.
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
You nailed the description, I tweaked the first for more guitar and cello.
Also the vocal.
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
Retro Rock . I wrote this , kind of in memory of Ace Frehely lead guitar
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
I am trying to figure out how I want to put this riff together, DSI and the old HB strat
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ibmorjamn
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Now @TVvoodoo , you have thrown out the gauntlet in the darkness with your composition “Decent”. I accept your challenge but beware
Prelude:
“This is the procession…of those who never returned.
”March… march… cobblestone…Never ending
Past the gate they roam
No beginningHmmmmm…… hmmmmmHmmmmm……hmmmmmOver and overagain they seek
souls to jointhe holy silent weak
No one dares cross their path
thieves and killers
no remorse
Chanting: March… march…dragging the weary
dying again and again
March to the blackness
Make no mistake treacherous beware
THE UNDYING CREEP IN EVERYWHERE
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night
[Prelude]
“This is the procession…of those who never returned.”
[VERSE]March… march… March cobble-stone…procession
Never ending procession Past the gate they roam
Rise from ash
No end beginning Hmmmmm…… hmmmmm Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
Over and over dark again they seek souls to join the unholy silent weak Hmmmmm……hmmmmm Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
No one dares cross their path thieves and killers no remorse
“This is the procession…”
[VERSE]
March… march… March cobble-stone…procession
Never ending procession
Past the gate they roam
Rise from ash
No end beginning
Hmmmmm…… hmmmmm
Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
Chant …March… march…dragging the weary dying again and again …march March to the blackness
Make no mistake treacherous beware
THE UNDYING CREEP IN EVERYWHERE
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night Step forward If you dare
Black cats run
Souls beware
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night
Prelude:
“This is the procession…of those who never returned.
”March… march… cobblestone…Never ending
Past the gate they roam
No beginningHmmmmm…… hmmmmmHmmmmm……hmmmmmOver and overagain they seek
souls to jointhe holy silent weak
No one dares cross their path
thieves and killers
no remorse
Chanting: March… march…dragging the weary
dying again and again
March to the blackness
Make no mistake treacherous beware
THE UNDYING CREEP IN EVERYWHERE
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night
[Prelude]
“This is the procession…of those who never returned.”
[VERSE]March… march… March cobble-stone…procession
Never ending procession Past the gate they roam
Rise from ash
No end beginning Hmmmmm…… hmmmmm Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
Over and over dark again they seek souls to join the unholy silent weak Hmmmmm……hmmmmm Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
No one dares cross their path thieves and killers no remorse
“This is the procession…”
[VERSE]
March… march… March cobble-stone…procession
Never ending procession
Past the gate they roam
Rise from ash
No end beginning
Hmmmmm…… hmmmmm
Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
Chant …March… march…dragging the weary dying again and again …march March to the blackness
Make no mistake treacherous beware
THE UNDYING CREEP IN EVERYWHERE
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night Step forward If you dare
Black cats run
Souls beware
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
This song, I play rhythm guitar , filtered it through Suno until I got a very strong production and re- conceived it. The video is completely done over to be a little more viewer friendly.
INTRO
She dropped her keys on the floor
dancing to that song
got down slow
caught every stare
batted her eyes
like nothing was wrong
VERSE 1
Just a cigarette on her lip she turned slow and shook her hip
Just a Look’y cold look'y here
get me a beer, man
PRE-CHORUS
She's got that look
a little dangerous
cold enough to shiver
yeah she's contagious
CHORUS
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
what you gonna do
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
shake it loose
VERSE 2
Just a cigarette burnin' slow
she don't smile
she lets it go
Don't come easy
don't come free
Mama's little dream girl
don't mess with me
look'y here
PRE-CHORUS
She's got that look
a little dangerous
cold enough to shiver
yeah , she's contagious
CHORUS
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
what you gonna do
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues shake it loose
BRIDGE
She dropped her keys on the floor
dancing to that song
got down slow
caught every stare
batted her eyes
like nothing was wrong
OUTRO
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House
Blues shake it loose
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick... House...
INTRO
She dropped her keys on the floor
dancing to that song
got down slow
caught every stare
batted her eyes
like nothing was wrong
VERSE 1
Just a cigarette on her lip she turned slow and shook her hip
Just a Look’y cold look'y here
get me a beer, man
PRE-CHORUS
She's got that look
a little dangerous
cold enough to shiver
yeah she's contagious
CHORUS
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
what you gonna do
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
shake it loose
VERSE 2
Just a cigarette burnin' slow
she don't smile
she lets it go
Don't come easy
don't come free
Mama's little dream girl
don't mess with me
look'y here
PRE-CHORUS
She's got that look
a little dangerous
cold enough to shiver
yeah , she's contagious
CHORUS
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
what you gonna do
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues shake it loose
BRIDGE
She dropped her keys on the floor
dancing to that song
got down slow
caught every stare
batted her eyes
like nothing was wrong
OUTRO
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick House
Blues shake it loose
Brick House Blues
Brick House Blues
Brick... House...
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
The Brick House Blues got a facelift.
I finally finished the Tracks and mixed it.
The Vocal is Suno because I just don't sing
The Drums are EZ drummer, again , not a drummer
All other tracks are recorded by me.
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I finally finished the Tracks and mixed it.
The Vocal is Suno because I just don't sing
The Drums are EZ drummer, again , not a drummer
All other tracks are recorded by me.
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ibmorjamn
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This video I finished today, the song is a rhythm I created this last week, wrote the lyrics with chatGPT for references.
The guitar and drum were processed with Suno AI. Before you deny it first listen, please.
I spent a lot of time to get a vocal that was acceptable.
The guitar and drum were processed with Suno AI. Before you deny it first listen, please.
I spent a lot of time to get a vocal that was acceptable.
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ibmorjamn
Ambassador of Moar Jammin
The original guitar, ez drum , and bass is in my DAW and the vocal stem I placed on the track in Reaper. The only thing I didn’t do is sing.
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ibmorjamn
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Thanks for watching.