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[ibmorjamn]

I'm curious. Did you write the lyrics?

Yes , at least twice.

 

[ibmorjamn]

Been too long now
This sad song
Those words drifted on somehow
Calling me back in
I feel so far
From you now

So wrong
But something else is coming through
That feeling
Comes backTo haunt me
But it’s gone
I never wanted
To let you go
But it’s been
So long
Between the noise
I can’t quite conceive
I hear you…Breathe
I think…I’m about to
Lose you now
I hear…
I just can’t let you
Let you go
I can’t
Let you go
I never wanted
To let you go
I am blue
One last thing
Just a few words
You have…
You have gone
Something else is coming through
That sad song
Is long gone

 

[ibmorjamn]

Music for me is evolving, so many choices.
I have several versions of this orchestral
Song. I wrote the lyrics , an after thought was the orchestra. I really wanted a song more like Jacob’s ladder but it is very different.

Poetry in Motion

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[ibmorjamn]

The version before is pretty good but I despise the synth/ sequence other that it’s good, what one is best?

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[ibmorjamn]

@Thatbastarddon , which one sounds more natural ?

 

[Thatbastarddon]

@Thatbastarddon , which one sounds more natural ?

I hate to judge these things. I like both, for different reasons. However, both share some sort of cinematic vibe…very “Hollywood soundtrack” IMO. This is in no way a bad thing in my book. The second one is shorter, and gets to the point more quickly. The first builds itself a space, and fills that space pretty well…more dynamic.

 

[Sargeant Preston]

I hate to judge these things. However, The first builds itself a space, and fills that space pretty well…more dynamic.

Don pretty much summed up my thoughts and posted my thoughts for me. That bastard Don always knows what I'm thinking.

 

[ibmorjamn]

I hate to judge these things. I like both, for different reasons. However, both share some sort of cinematic vibe…very “Hollywood soundtrack” IMO. This is in no way a bad thing in my book. The second one is shorter, and gets to the point more quickly. The first builds itself a space, and fills that space pretty well…more dynamic.

You nailed the description, I tweaked the first for more guitar and cello.
Also the vocal.

 

[ibmorjamn]

Retro Rock . I wrote this , kind of in memory of Ace Frehely lead guitar

I want To Hear You !

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[ibmorjamn]

I am trying to figure out how I want to put this riff together, DSI and the old HB strat

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[ibmorjamn]

Now @TVvoodoo , you have thrown out the gauntlet in the darkness with your composition “Decent”. I accept your challenge but beware

Prelude:
“This is the procession…of those who never returned.
”March… march… cobblestone…Never ending
Past the gate they roam
No beginningHmmmmm…… hmmmmmHmmmmm……hmmmmmOver and overagain they seek
souls to jointhe holy silent weak
No one dares cross their path
thieves and killers
no remorse

Chanting: March… march…dragging the weary
dying again and again
March to the blackness
Make no mistake treacherous beware
THE UNDYING CREEP IN EVERYWHERE
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night

[Prelude]

“This is the procession…of those who never returned.”
[VERSE]March… march… March cobble-stone…procession
Never ending procession Past the gate they roam
Rise from ash
No end beginning Hmmmmm…… hmmmmm Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
Over and over dark again they seek souls to join the unholy silent weak Hmmmmm……hmmmmm Hmmmmm……hmmmmm
No one dares cross their path thieves and killers no remorse
“This is the procession…”

[VERSE]

March… march… March cobble-stone…procession
Never ending procession
Past the gate they roam
Rise from ash
No end beginning
Hmmmmm…… hmmmmm
Hmmmmm……hmmmmm

Chant …March… march…dragging the weary dying again and again …march March to the blackness
Make no mistake treacherous beware

THE UNDYING CREEP IN EVERYWHERE
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night Step forward If you dare
Black cats run
Souls beware
Souls, heavy as soot in air reign… the night