The last page look exactly like a bunch of chibberish I have written down..LRT and I are working on a new one tonight
I was curious: does anybody else write out their song structures like this? I realize that this probably looks like gibberish to you seasoned veterans of the songwriter wars...but it (said gibberish) makes sense to me, and as long as I know what's going on, I am good to go...but I am also pretty new to this "arrangement" thing...
Thoughts, TTR?
...GO!
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the one before the bottomUhh....so the last page of legible writing, or the one towards the bottom that my son did?![]()


Uhh....so the last page of legible writing, or the one towards the bottom that my son did?![]()





I can hear the potential this song hasThank you gentlemen....there is one other recording of this same one, but with LRT and I playing it together. It's rough, very rough and it still needs work...my "lead" sucks (hence why I've made the backing track for myself, this horsecrap was all improvised and I was NOT prepared), the recording is dirtier and I think maybe one of us was possibly not tuned, or squeezing the strings too hard at the very beginning, because that part sounds awfully not in tune to me lol...pretty sour...but anyways, here's that recording too:
[EDIT]: After another listen, I think I believe LRT and I have committed the cardinal sin of NOT TUNING PROPERLY before playing. This sounds pretty awful and I am embarrassed LOL! But what the hell. Laugh about it with me. I guess it's documenting the progress in any case...



Fair assessmentHell i like it,like you glued Metalica and Black Sabbath togther. :dood:
:dood:I could name all the influences I think I hear in my own playing, but the list would go on and on and on...and on some more...I am also , but I am hearing another of my influences in it,
A Michael Schenker vibe mixed with Maiden![]()
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:dood:
I'd be curious to see what you guys might say after I get the solo worked out how I'd like it....there is actually a VERY Maiden-ish run I plan on using in the solo, (among some others), but it doesn't show up in that last clipI am also , but I am hearing another of my influences in it,
A Michael Schenker vibe mixed with Maiden![]()
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:dood:
Like I said it’s going to be a greatI'd be curious to see what you guys might say after I get the solo worked out how I'd like it....there is actually a VERY Maiden-ish run I plan on using in the solo, (among some others), but it doesn't show up in that last clip