Kerry Brown
Ambassador of the Great Northern Bar Jams
I've never been a hard rock player but some of the posts here have inspired me to give it a try, Constructive criticism appreciated.
Trying something out of my wheelhouse
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Kerry Brown
Ambassador of the Great Northern Bar Jams
Like I said it is so far out of my wheelhouse I didn’t know what to call it. I’ll go with heavy.
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Kerry Brown
Ambassador of the Great Northern Bar Jams
I’m working on lyrics. I find lyrics are the hardest part.
I find both both are the hardest part. You’re 50% of the way there. I’d still be trying to figure out the chord progression.
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BFT Gibson
Ambassador of Originality
Very nice !! Nice soaring lead.. prob my fav over all the speed that congests things..great job..welcoming your wheelhouse to the dark side
I loved it slow heavy progression that takes you on a journey, you need to do some more of this KB.
The canvas is wide open here, the only thing I would do to it is, put a slow chugging bridge into the center, then come back to those soaring melodic lead pieces you where already doing.
Did I mention that I loved it.
If you where my neighbor we could put together a couple of albums in no time.
Thanks for sharing your work brother
Cheers
Mitch
The canvas is wide open here, the only thing I would do to it is, put a slow chugging bridge into the center, then come back to those soaring melodic lead pieces you where already doing.
Did I mention that I loved it.
If you where my neighbor we could put together a couple of albums in no time.
Thanks for sharing your work brother
Cheers
Mitch
BFT Gibson
Ambassador of Originality
the art of the breakdown..good call. I use it as a reset & a blender of the chord progression & incorporate the drum then in so continuity passes from early build to ending crescendo type thing...basically have no idea what i'm doing lol..but that sounded like i do
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Kerry Brown
Ambassador of the Great Northern Bar Jams
Thank you all for the encouragement. I’ll continue on with this and see where it goes.
Bravo Brother I am going to be waiting , and on edge for you next one to arrive.
Cheers
I liked it very much! It sounded much like I do from time to time...just picking away with dirt and delay....fun stuff Kerry! Thanks for sharing!
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Kerry Brown
Ambassador of the Great Northern Bar Jams
Here's my latest version. I have a question about recording. On the lead track I can hear my fingers sliding on the string. Is there a way to lose that noise or is it just technique with my fretting hand.? I've added an introduction with a twelve string and also a twelve string track playing the power chords. The lead track starts out loud then goes quieter with a simple repeating riff. That's where I want to add some vocals. Once again constructive criticism is invited. This genre is very new to me.
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It’s a very deep and joyful journey
The open canvas for the lyric melody is broad, and I would love to hear a bridge section to put the icing on the cake.
Thanks for sharing your work this is some awesome music , even if it is not what your comfortable with.
Sounds to me as if you are comfortable with so much more.
Cheers
Mitch
The open canvas for the lyric melody is broad, and I would love to hear a bridge section to put the icing on the cake.
Thanks for sharing your work this is some awesome music , even if it is not what your comfortable with.
Sounds to me as if you are comfortable with so much more.
Cheers
Mitch
It’s a technique thing....no “real” magic pill....unfortunately.... there are noise reduction plugs that’ll mitigate the sound a bit, butt....capture the sound you want....
RVA
Ambassador
I am in a"mood", so I just penned a title and some lyrics while listening to your song
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"My Backyard"
Don’t mind trying, this old town.
Been here before, I’ve stomped these grounds.
This is the
that made me proud, that made me tough, then put me down.
This is the place that I come from, but it got old, became unwound.
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F-kc your roads and f-kc your woods.
And f-kc all those who thought I could.
I fed this earth with tears and blood.
And grew a hunger, twisted manhood
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Take me home, take me back.
Join the fire, cinders and black.
Join the party, you helped to make.
Test your will, your soul to take.
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F-kc your roads and f-kc your woods.
And f-kc all that you thought was good.
I fed this earth with tears and blood.
And grew a hunger, twisted manhood
=========
I warned you not to ride me hard.
Way back when, in my backyard.
The water’s fine jump on in.
Join my life of blissful sin!
===================================
"My Backyard"
Don’t mind trying, this old town.
Been here before, I’ve stomped these grounds.
This is the
that made me proud, that made me tough, then put me down.This is the place that I come from, but it got old, became unwound.
============
F-kc your roads and f-kc your woods.
And f-kc all those who thought I could.
I fed this earth with tears and blood.
And grew a hunger, twisted manhood
=============
Take me home, take me back.
Join the fire, cinders and black.
Join the party, you helped to make.
Test your will, your soul to take.
==============
F-kc your roads and f-kc your woods.
And f-kc all that you thought was good.
I fed this earth with tears and blood.
And grew a hunger, twisted manhood
=========
I warned you not to ride me hard.
Way back when, in my backyard.
The water’s fine jump on in.
Join my life of blissful sin!
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Really great lyrics RayI am in a"mood", so I just penned a title and some lyrics while listening to your song
===================================
"My Backyard"
Don’t mind trying, this old town.
Been here before, I’ve stomped these grounds.
This is the
This is the place that I come from, but it got old, and I got proud.
============
F-kc your roads and f-kc your woods.
And f-kc all those who thought I could.
I fed this earth with tears and blood.
And grew a hunger, sinister manhood
=============
Take me home, take me back.
Join the fire, cinders and black.
Join the party, you helped to make.
Test your will, your soul to take.
==============
F-kc your roads and f-kc your woods.
And f-kc all those who thought I could.
I fed this earth with tears and blood.
And grew a hunger, sinister manhood
=========
I warned you not to ride me hard.
Way back when, in my backyard.
The water’s fine jump on in.
Join my life of blissful sin!
Cheers
Mitch