song lyric request.

Ramo

Ramo

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hey gang, I would like to ask a little favor.


I wrote a new track and it needs lyrics, usually, I can write them but on this occasion, I would like to try a different approach.

The song subject is ectoplasm, ( I know I'm a weird one) anyway, if you would like to help me out, I can send the song ( might trigger seizures upon hearing it) and would like lyrics done as soon as possible.

cheers

Ramo
 
Death in your touch
A mouth full of lies
Your body dies
But the demon survives

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me

What sort of fool must I be
To let you inside of me
Let you play on my fear
Pretend I needed you here

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn't safe
To be alone
The fog you can't get off the glass
The Ectoplasm is closing fast

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me

The one I loved, things I held dear
Seem meaningless when the Ecto's near
I tried to fight, I tried to hide
I stayed where good resides
But the Ecto threw its evil shade
On everything I thought to save

For the sake of all that still remained
I flushed my life down the drain
I gave myself to Ecto's will
And tasted blood that I helped spill
Ecto pointed to a path
That unleased my wicked wrath

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me

But now I have my revenge
Make Ecto die once again
The tortured soul he touched this time
Comes back as evil more sublime
Than any power Ecto's known
And I will sit on Ecto's throne

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
 
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RVA said:
Death in your touch
A mouth full of lies
Your body dies
But the demon survives

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me

What sort of fool must I be
To let you inside of me
Let you play on my fear
Pretend I needed you here

But now I will have my revenge
Make you die once again
The soul you tortured this time
Comes back as evil sublime

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
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Wow! that's very deep Ray..
 
RVA said:
Death in your touch
A mouth full of lies
Your body dies
But the demon survives

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me

What sort of fool must I be
To let you inside of me
Let you play on my fear
Pretend I needed you here

But now I will have my revenge
Make you die once again
The soul you tortured this time
Comes back as evil sublime

I can't get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I can't control
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Steals the beat from heart
Tears my world apart
Your Ectoplasm smothers me
Click to expand...
thanks so much my brother, i dig it.


donkey will be singing it tomorrow :) (me)
 
@RVA

hey brother this is how I changed it, i need few more lines :)afrer power of unknown line.

Ectoplasm



I cant get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I cant control
Your ectoplasm smothers me
Steals beat from the heart



Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart
Yeah

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone

What sort of fool must I be
To let you inside of me
Let you play on my fear
Pretend I need you here
But now I will have my revenge
Make you die once again
The soul you tortured this time
Comes back as evil sublime

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone

The one I loved,things I held dear
Seems meaningless when Ecto’s near
I tried to fight,I tried to hide
I stayed away where good resides
But the Ecto threw its evil shade
On everything, I thought to save
For the sake of all that still remained
I flushed my life down the drain
I gave myself to Ecto’s will
And tasted blood I helped spill
Ecto pointed to a haunted path
That unleashed my wicked wrath
But now I have my revenge
Make Ecto die again and agin
The tortured soul he touched this time
Became even more evil sublime
Now I rule Ectos throne
With power of unknown




Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart
Yeah

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone



Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart



Death is your touch
A mouth full of lies
Your body dies but
The demon survives
 
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Ramo said:
@RVA

hey brother this is how I changed it, i need few more lines :)afrer power of unknown line.

Ectoplasm



I cant get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I cant control
Your ectoplasm smothers me
Steals beat from the heart



Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart
Yeah

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone

What sort of fool must I be
To let you inside of me
Let you play on my fear
Pretend I need you here
But now I will have my revenge
Make you die once again
The soul you tortured this time
Comes back as evil sublime

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone

The one I loved,things I held dear
Seems meaningless when Ecto’s near
I tried to fight,I tried to hide
I stayed away where good resides
But the Ecto threw its evil shade
On everything I thought to save
For the sake of all that still remained
I flushed my life down the drain
I gave myself to Ecto’s will
And tasted blood I helped spill
Ecto pointed to a haunted path
That unleashed my wicked wrath
But now I have my revenge
Make Ecto die again and agin
The tortured soul he touched this time
Became even more evil sublime
Now I rule Ectos throne
With power of unknown



The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone



Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart



Death is your touch
A mouth full of lies
Your body dies but
The demon survives
Click to expand...

That's sweet. :D
 
Ok i made the lyrics fit and this is final version so far....

Ectoplasm

I cant get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I cant control
Your ectoplasm smothers me
Steals beat from the heart

Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart

Yeah

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone


What sort of fool must I be
To let you inside of me
Let you play on my fear
Pretend I need you here
But now I will have my revenge
Make you die once again
The soul you tortured this time
Comes back as evil sublime

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone


The one I loved,things I held dear
Seems meaningless when Ecto’s near
I tried to fight,I tried to hide
I stayed away where good resides
But the Ecto threw its evil shade
On everything I thought to save
For the sake of all that still remained
I flushed my life down the drain
I gave myself to Ecto’s will
And tasted blood I helped spill
Ecto pointed to a haunted path
That unleashed my wicked wrath
But now I have my revenge
Make Ecto die again and agin
The tortured soul he touched this time
Became even more evil sublime
Now I rule Ectos throne
With power of unknown

Tears my world apart
Your ectoplasm
Steals beat from the heart
Yeah

The chill that finds you
Under your covers at home
That sense that it isn’t safe
To be alone

I cant get your filth off my soul
A rise of hate I cant control
Your ectoplasm smothers me
Steals beat from the heart


Death is your touch
A mouth full of lies
Your body dies but
The demon survives
 
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