Put the Jackson Dinky to work on this one.
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Clockworkmike
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Nicely done!
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Metal89
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Thanks! Although there are a few sections not sitting quite right to my ear. I think I fell victim to ear fatigue and didn’t quite catch it. Then again in some stereos it sounds just fine. Just need to tweak the panning and maybe volume.
Edit: I JUST realized that the solo repeats the same melody just in different keys... I’ll have to fix that and add some variation. This is what I get for working on music tired and not feeling well, things I should had caught on to went right over my head.
Im taking the song and going to make improvements, the solo, panning, and adding orchestra bits to the riffs.
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Metal89
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it’s one of those, “I’m my own worst critic.” Things. Plus I just fixed the solo and now I’m much happier with that. Just have to add the orchestra bits
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Metal89
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That’s actually a really good idea, can definitely do that!
Don’t get me wrong. Ending a song with full on tension is also a very valid way to close it out. I like both.
You do fantastic work brother.. I have not heard a dud yet..
Cheers
Mitch
Cheers
Mitch
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Metal89
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Haha, thanks!
but I know it’s bound to happen at some point, and as i said before, I’m my own worst critic 
honestly, I’m going to be putting together an EP album of about 5 songs, and wanted this one to be the first track, so I’m being that much more particular about it. Wanted to give a sinister but tragic vibe with this one.
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Metal89
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I’m glad, and I really appreciate the feedback
steveb63
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I like it as well, you have a great ear brotha.I’m glad, and I really appreciate the feedback
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Metal89
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Thanks man!