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The song I posted above @TVvoodoo was an early song I did many months ago for this project. It has been cover after cover on Suno attempts get it right, me playing on guitar never turned very good in comparison.
The lyric content was whimsical intentionally but it was deemed to be not up to par.
Now I finally re-wrote the lyrics and the vocals and melody fit this perfectly. I can not imagine a better arrangement.

The Rainbow Chaser is Now a Star Gazer in a seedy underground bar from the 70’s trying get noticed by the house band to catch a break. One word is wrong,
“wouldn’t “ should have been “would”. Other than that it needs one more chorus and verse.
 
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"The Rainbow Chaser is Now a Star Gazer in a seedy underground bar from the 70’s trying get noticed by the house band to catch a break."
Oh, i'm feeling this.
For sure i'm feeling it.
 
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"The Rainbow Chaser is Now a Star Gazer in in a seedy underground bar from the 70’s trying get noticed by the house band to catch a break."
Oh, i'm feeling this.
For sure i'm feeling it.
Thanks, writing lyrics has never been a focus , I wanted to try but it seems like it was never all that good. This song just intrigues me .
I have always been in to hard rock but if I could write one good song that is appealing to a wide range it would be cool.
In other words I think of Paul Mc Cartney but as inspiration. I could never be that good .lol
 
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