My Attempt At Commercial Song Writing.

[guitarweasel]

Another oldie trying to score a record deal.........Fail!

Again And Again

 

[Thatbastarddon]

Dude! Thanks for sharing! I pick a little Bowie out of the vocals at the start. But It digressed to a different thing after the first verse.
Good pop though!
I wish I could write like that sometimes.

 

[guitarweasel]

Dude! Thanks for sharing! I pick a little Bowie out of the vocals at the start. But It digressed to a different thing after the first verse.
Good pop though!
I wish I could write like that sometimes.

Yeah the intro was totally Bowie.

 

[Inspector #20]

I love the creative process irregardless. I'm impressed!